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Also, name the review you're talking about.

Piffman2 Edit: sorry Assie, but I think this thread would be better if people could give feedback on ANY review

"Reply to your comment on: TheAssailant6661 Reviews: Happy Feet
I did this in 2 days, including the recording. I know, but they'll get better. It's kinda like Sonic games. After a complete success your first time around, you start to suck. Meh."

what is this "complete success" and how can I see it?

oh we're supposed to give feedback? your happy feet review was laughably bad, actually. the acting was bat shit on a stick (were you the one playing death? you need more actors/friends), you playing mario kart for 30 seconds is pointless, there are audio problems (your voice is way lower than the tv. the sounds from the tv are really pretty pointless (but you can keep them in at a low sound) and your voice are really the most important thing) and the video quality's pretty bad (although maybe you can't afford better equipment in which case you can skip this.) the only thing you've improved on over time is the fact that your reviews are shorter (if you don't make it good quality like Storm (although his reviews are incredibly good so don't take it too seriously) don't make it as long since people don't care) and you've stopped with breathing in the middle of sentences which was a real pain.

there you go, gov'na'.

Speking of quality, i just realized my Laptop is 32-bit, so i can use that to capture the video and then send it to my computer over ethernet.

Also, Storm had more practice in the acting department when he started reviewing games, and he also had practice reviewing things. But go ahead anyway, and review my reviews!

You rock! You're G2G!(Good to Go)

nice review

um u need to speak up a bit more and make sure it's well written and remember to rehearse it alot b4 u make the final recording

The reviews are not bad but can be a little longer.

I pictured you saying that in a Simon Cowell form.

OP edited, now post your feedback for any review

do a barrel roll!

tip 1. do NOT film your screen with a cheap webcam (sorry piff if that's what you're using, I honestly don't know...) it will make the review amateurish and the light hurts peoples eyes and then they stop watching the review. if you're gonna do a review you're gonna do it in style.

tip 2. keep people entertained. sometimes only being serious won't keep people watching, no matter how good the review may be. now I know what you're thinking "IGN and GT then? they make serious reviews all the time and people listen to them!" but that's because people know they're professionals who get payed to review games. you don't. probably nobody knows you when you start off and only telling friends will mostly get you nowhere, which leads me to my next point:

tip 3. your first review won't be perfect. it just won't, and don't even think of comparing yourself to storm. he's got tons of camera experience through the years by both interviewing random people and reviewing movies.


I win.

I like the reviews so far but is Storm gonna put some review up? Even if they aren't new. I would be satisfied with an archive like Piffman's or Assie's. Not to rush him or anything though

He keeps saying he will, maybe when his new review comes out.

The more practice with acting you do, the easier it becomes. that goes for anything really, but for someone who hasn't ever acted before, I'm glad you took a chance and did it. Take multiple takes and see what you like best. just locate your style and then you'll be fine.
reviews take a ton of work (main reason i haven't submitted anything yet, no time! ). i look forward in seeing you grow as a reviewer.

way to go.